BEC高级写作讲义(2)

country’s manufacturing and agricultural sectors in terms of exports and imports between 1991 and 2001.

? Using the information from the graphs, write a short report

describing the general movements in exports, imports and the resulting balance of trade. ? Write 120-140 words.

1. 词语不多，难度不大，阅读时间尽量缩短

2. 斜体字部分基本为Part One惯例，可基本忽略阅读

3. 下划线部分为题目“不同内容”所在，亦是表格的主要内容 4. 根据题目要求和图表内容“再造”下划线部分

如：表格描述的是欧洲某国工业和农业在1991到2001年间进出口情况，而后将此句子翻译为英文即可。（The two charts describe one European country’s manufacturing and agricultural performance in exports and imports parts during 1991 and 2001.）

2． 如何订框架：Basic Structure基本框架（见上页）

A. Introduction Part：简要介绍题目、图表内容，基本内容如上英文表达，

即先根据题目和图表归纳出中文内容，后将其内容翻译成英文即可成为开始部分。适当将上句进行修改为：

? The aim of the report is to summarize the changes of one European country’s agricultural and manufacturing sectors’ exports and imports performance during 1991 and 2001.

? 下划线部分为Introduction部分模板句型，其他句型还有：

? The ? chart ( or graph ) shows \\ displays \\ outlines \\ describes \\ summaries \\ indicates \\ reflects ? .

? This is a report about ?.

? As we can see \\ learn from the chart (or graph) ?.

? The aim of the report is to summarize \\ describe \\ outline ?.

? The report describes \\ summaries \\ outlines \\ shows the change of \\ in ? .

B. Findings Part：说明数字变化、走势及对比数据，该部分为第一部分写

作重中之重，因为在一份专业的商业报告中，对于数据走势的描写十分重要，它可能影响某商业活动的发展方向，通过对数据变化的描写可以增强公司决策层在发展企业的正确判断可能性。此部分也是锻炼考生逻辑思维和缜密思考的能力。

? 既然数据走势为重中之重，那么对于数据走势的描写就必须进行积累，

这里提供部分趋势描写词汇或短语，可供模板使用：

1. 表示上升：Increase, go up, rise, grow, jump, climb (动词)；An

increase, a growth, a jump, an upward trend (名词词组)

2. 表示下降：fall, decrease, go down, slide, collapse, decline, drop

（动词）；A collapse, a decrease, a fall, a decline, a drop （名词词组）

3. 表示波动：from?to?, between?and?（在......之间）； at the start

of?, at the end of ?， throughout (自始至终)?（时间）；a fluctuation from ? to ?, fluctuate ?（波动，起伏） 4. 两个必记介词：...to...（到某一点），...by...（涨了多少） 5. 最高,at the top (peak) of，最低,at the bottom of

? 对比会增加考官对文章的印象，充实文章内容的内容；但必须注意，进

行对比时必须是同类比同类，如上题中出现的可能对比的类型为工业VS工业，农业VS农业；或进口VS进口，出口VS出口。 ? 增加适当的联词，如关联词（But，However...），形容词、副词（Slowly，

fast...）对文章的连贯性会有很好的帮助，此处提供部分关联词语可供模板套用：

1. 描写程度大小：slightly, gradually, slowly, steadily（程度较小）；

considerably, dramatically, greatly, markedly, obviously, quickly, rapidly, sharply, significantly, suddenly（程度较大）

2. 表示顺序：first, firstly, initially, secondly, to begin with, then, next,

after, followed(-ing), at last, afterwards(以后、后来), first and foremost(首要的) 3. 表示时间：before, since, as, until, meanwhile, at the moment, when,

whenever, as soon as, just as? 4. 表示对比：however, on the other hand, whether, despite, in spite of,

though, although, but, otherwise, yet, instead of, rather, even though, compared with, in contrast, nevertheless, alternatively(二者选一)

5. 表示强调：indeed, in fact, obviously, certainly, plainly, of course ? 如上述模板及联词，该题可归纳为：

A. 中文：工业在91-01年间进口与出口上升幅度均较大，但进口低于

出口；二者基本属于波动上升态势，91年最低，01年最高，进出口最低最高值分别是......。 英文：The performance of manufacturing sector during the decay is more better than agricultural. Both exports and imports show significant upward trends, and exports act better than imports, but the distance between them is much less than the agricultural’s. The fluctuations for both sectors are steadily. The bottoms for both parts are in 1991, while the tops are in 2001.

B. 中文：农业在此区间内虽呈现上升态势，但速度没工业快，且进出

口额度差距较大；92年前后仅出口值出现下滑，至94年前后恢复上升，而到99年二者又呈现下滑趋势，且没出现恢复状态。

英文：On the other hand, the agricultural sectors show increased slightly during the ten years. The same as manufacturing sectors, agricultural’s exports also performed better than its imports and the gap between them is at least 3 billion dollars. Both sectors dropped during 1992 to 1994 and then rised again. The same dropping situation appeared after 1999, which marked at the top of

both sectors are in 1999.

? 上述英文内容并无出现具体数字内容，而十分强调数据变化趋势。并且巧妙运用关联词语。考生在练习是可适当进行部分趋势描写删减或增加对于具体数字的描写以便训练出更适合自己的文体模式。

3． 归纳：

? 不要猜、不要估计，直接归纳客观联系即可

如上题所述，其图表内容最类似部分即为不管农业工业，在此10年间均呈现上升态势。

Both agricultural and manufacturing sectors show upward trends during the decay.

? 部分关于归纳总结的词组：

A. 表示结果：as a result, as a consequence, thus, so, therefore, it

follows that, eventually, then, thereby

B. 表示总结：in conclusion, in summary, lastly, finally, to sum up, to

conclude, in short, in a word

? 注意该部分需要考虑字数限制，按上内容（英文部分，字数已经超过140词，故此处可以适当考虑是否增加此部分）；若字数已经超出规定字数，则不需再加任何关于归纳性语言，可在开始Introduction部分进行一定修改即可。

4． 检查

? 上述表达有无语法、时态或者拼写错误，根据考官一般习惯，适量的语

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