高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：2015年高考满分作文(6)

Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.

Two years ago，our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange，nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong，I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later，I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him，the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.

From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth. 【亮点说明】

首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，serve as等。

12.2015年湖南卷

请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. 注意：

1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上； 2. 续写词数不少于120个； 3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】

本文是一篇开放性作文，考生只要根据所给的信息进行写作即可。题中给出的内容是：作为一名学生，在同学面前受老师表扬是世界上最好的事。气候的故事、感想等写作空间很大，可以自由发挥。可主要围绕受表扬的原因、感受来写。

1.主题为“当众受到老师的表扬”。写作时人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。 2.写作步骤：

(1)续写一件当众受到老师表扬的经历； (2)总结这次经历对自己产生的影响。 【参考范文】

As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.

I felt extremely nervous the instant the class began. The reason was that the new English teacher Mr. Zhang might announce the exam result and that I would probably get scolded as before. Surprisingly，when entering the classroom，he glanced at us，saying gently，“Today，I won’t talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam.I do hope he will make more progress with great efforts.”On hearing what he said，I couldn’t hold back my tears.It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates. From then on，I fell in love with English. You can’t imagine how grateful I am to Mr. Zhang. Without his praise. I couldn’t have gone so far in my English study. …… 此处隐藏：1011字，全部文档内容请下载后查看。喜欢就下载吧 ……