高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：2015年高考满分作文(4)

1.表达写信意图； 2.陈述应征目的；

3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。 写作要求：

1.邮件词数不少于100； 2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯 4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear Ms Chen，

I’m Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”的一则招募启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。 【参考范文】 Dear Ms Chen，

I’m Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organisational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates. Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with, have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯

9.2015年福建卷

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