高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：2015年高考满分作文(3)

I’m Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High Schoo1.I’m writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school，we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them，you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.We’ll take the books when

participating in the summer camp this July to your schoo1.

Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship. Best wishes!

Yours， Li Jin

6.2015年北京卷

第一节 （15分）

假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：

1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间、地点、参加者等）； 2. 说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 询问对方的意向。 注意：

1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp

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本文为提纲类作文，在写作时应主要使用第一人称和第二人称，时态包括一般将来时、一般现在时和现在进行时。

参考词汇：summer holiday暑假

本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)—期待和感谢。 【满分范文】 Dear Jim，

I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder

if you’d like to go with me.

This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers，1ike you and me，a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it，1et me know and I’ll send you more information.

Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. Yours， Li Hua 【亮点说明】

本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。 第二节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 注意： 词数不少于60。

提示词： 一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine

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【写作指导】

本文依然用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，与往年一样，体裁为记叙文，与往年不同的是，命题并未给出作文开头，需学生自己写一个事件的概括及总体感受作为文章的第一段。

1.本文为图画类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。 2.内容要点 (1)欢迎 (2)示范 (3)实践 (4)拍照 【满分范文】

Last Tuesday，our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.

When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. We hope we can have more activities of this kind！

【亮点说明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。

全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。

7.2015年安徽卷

某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括：

1. 采访的对象； 2. 采访的原因； 3. 想提的问题。 注意：

1. 词数120左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4. 短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

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1.本文为提纲类作文，写作时主要采用第一人称，时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。 2.内容要点：

(1)表明采访的对象； (2)阐明采访的原因； (3)说明想提的问题。 【满分范文】

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

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